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| Last Hope by AfterEver | 1 Review(s) |
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| Muinthel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/4/2003 |
| ...I really enjoyed the last two chapters....! I had to smile so often at your discription of little Aragorn. It felt like watching my sons again in that age. And also the feelings of Aragorn...wanting to go home...I had my younger son in my arm while reading! And I like the way you discribe the growing friendship of Elladan and Gilraen (and the respect they have for each other). I sense the fight in Gilraen - wanting to know more about the elves and on the other side feeling a little uncomfortable with the ancient folk for not knowing so much about them. I can`t wait to read more...your style puts me in the situation of a small spy watching secretly what will happens!! Ps: I hope you understand what I try to say....english is not my native....!!! Author Reply: Muinthel, Your English is perfect, and I thank you kindly for the review. So glad you're enjoying the tale! :-) | |