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| The Price of Freedom by erin lasgalen | 3 Review(s) |
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| IceAngel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/7/2003 |
| Hello, this is IceAngel from AmonSul Thanks for uploading the new chapter, I look forward to reading it. Usually I'll be able to find the updates myself so you guys don't have to send them to me each time, but if you see that I havn't upated, just let me know like you did for this chapter, or through the forum which I check daily. http://pub15.bravenet.com/forum/fetch.php?usernum=1232447165&msgid=136474&mode=&cp= Good writing! IceAngel | |
| Nymeria | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/6/2003 |
| Hi! I really like what you've written so far. The chapters are nice and long and very well written. The fact that it is a AU doesn't spoil anything and we can't take anything we know from cannon for granted. I hope you will update soon, you left us with a nasty cliffhanger. Alright so it wasn't exactly a cliffhanger, but still I can't wait to read the next chapter :) Happy writing! | |
| The Karenator | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/5/2003 |
| erin, This is quite an interesting story. It took a wide turn I didn't expect when I read the first chapter. Of course, I realized it was AU, but I didn't realize that Eowyn would become the mother of an Amazon tribe! (I mean that in the best possible way!) You have created some incredible OC's with very realistic personalities. The entire plot is well thought out and put to paper in a concise and well written manner. The dark haired elf of the Hunters was a strangly captivating character and wholly frightening. The battle scene and the confusion of who was who was very well done. I think war scenes are hard to write and you put on a good show! Well, now that Gimli and Legolas are back in the story...a little worse for the wear...it should liven things up...as though they were dull to start with. I look forward to seeing where you take this. :>) Karen | |