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| The Search by Jay of Lasgalen | 3 Review(s) |
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| Lady Jaina | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 11/10/2003 |
| I loved this! Some interesting insight into what has been bothering Elladan! Love all the attention to the twins in this one! Great job! Author Reply: I'm glad you're enjoying it. There will be lots more focus on the twins to come, as well. Jay | |
| Yuna_Dax | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 11/9/2003 |
| WOOHOO another chapter :) Brilliance as always, with lovely levels and angst and general gut-wrenching emotion. Absolutely brillant :) :: waits eagerly for the next chapter and starts formulating theories as to Elladan's illness and how his greif could consume him before Elrohir can re-establish the fact that he is alive:: Jules Author Reply: Thanks yet again for the review! There is plenty more angst and emotion to come. The next chapter is up, but you will have to wait a while to see what is going to happen to Elladan. Jay | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 11/8/2003 |
| You do Elladan's confusion very well! He is so disoriented and the reader can really see how he would believe that his delusions are real. But how ironic that it was himself Elladan saw in his visions. Author Reply: Thanks, Daw! I tried to make his reasoning logical (considering the state he was in) and at the same time convey how bewildering his memories are. I hope you lke the latest twist! Jay | |