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Last Hope  by AfterEver 1 Review(s)
Brenda G.Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/6/2003
Wow... The rainy day interlude between Gilraen and her husband was amazing in detail and depth. And also very beautiful. You defined in that one passage what love should be for those who are joined heart to heart, body to body, soul to soul: joy, pleasure, playfulness, passion, total freedom, total abandonment, total fulfillment. Gilraen elicits my sympathy, my admiration, and also my envy (a little bit, anyway). Very nicely written.

This just keeps getting better and better, and I am ready for more.

BG



Author Reply: Brenda, thank you times infinity. I'm in the process of refining the next chapter - won't be long. :-)

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