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A Brandybuck Turns Baggins  by Iorhael 1 Review(s)
JULES6Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2004
Hi Iorhael,


I really like the idea that Merry was feeling a little more than sad about Frodo leaving Brandy Hall. The emotions were well described - from Frodo's excitement and anticipation to Merry's thoughts about what his cousin had missed out on in Brandy Hall and towards the end - a little anger starting to creep into his reply.

Very nicely done part to open with.


JULES

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