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| Sentiment's Turn by Mysterious Jedi | 2 Review(s) |
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| DAYNA | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/28/2004 |
| wonderful, jedi! this is very interesting so far! I do have a helpful hint, however: King Elessar merely smiled at her astonishment. "It is said that Orcs are the descendants of elves ruined by evil. If darkness can make an orc an elf, I see no reason that light cannot turn one back again." I think you meant to say "darkness can make an ELF an ORC..." you put it the other way around. Or did I misread it. I am notorious for that, you know. keep up the good work! I like this story! Author Reply: Hmm... I guess I thought I had replied to this months ago, sorry. Anyways, thanks for commenting and pointing out my mistake. | |
| hobbit_lass | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/12/2004 |
| Very Interesting! Cant wait to see what comes next- Author Reply: Thank you for taking the time to read and review. | |