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| Fear by Ariel | 3 Review(s) |
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| Lily the Hobbit | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 12/6/2004 |
| Drogo, the best father in the world, eh? You're so right! :) First a note on the formate. You should check this chapter again. It is written in rather small letters. Now to the chapter itself. Poor Frodo. I so hope he is not going to hurt himself with his stubborn determination. And... concerning Primula's visions. Believe it or not, I had thoughts about similar things happening in Dear Diary or a new story. :) Author Reply: Oh, dear! I will have to fix that formatting once I get home. I thought I had them all fixed! Grrr. Awww... Well, I hope you don't mind the way I handle Frodo. He's no fool, even at 8, and I won't make him do anything stupid. I can't seem to do anything like that to my dearest hobbit. LOL! Primula and visions. ;) Frodo had to get that tendency from somewhere, eh? Ariel | |
| Elentari | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/23/2003 |
| wow... great chapter, Ariel! i really really enjoyed reading this chapter and the chapter before... You have great descriptions of emotion and surroundings. Your detailed writing makes for it be a great piece! I love that last scene with Dody and Frodo but i dont' understand why Primula is having these nightmares of what seems to be the future... But I can't wait for more. hanned le, ~Elentari Author Reply: I will hopefully make it clear in the next chapter (or the one after). I'd explain, but I think Primula herself would do a better job of it. Thank you so much for your kind review and I will try to get working on the next bit as soon as I can! | |
| Arwen Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/23/2003 |
| Oh this chapter was so good! I loved Frodo and Dody's conversation and Frodo's notice of Primula's attitude change after her dream-visions. But will Frood be walking when Drogo returns, and will Dody cause him to get hurt while they're practicing Frodo's balance and walking. And what will Drogo find and say when he returns. And how much will Frodo eventually remember. And are you going to do a segment when Frodo's parents die? *Begs on knees, once again* PLEASE!!!!!!!!! That would be a PERFECT sequel! Author Reply: LOL! You'll have to let me finish THIS story first! I will have to see how the muses hit me but I will definitely keep your request in mind! Thank you for your lovely words and enthusiasm. Ariel | |