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| Tempest: Modern Age by TolkienScribe | 3 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/17/2017 |
| This sounds terribly intriguing! I look forward to more. | |
| Gray Day | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/11/2017 |
| The use of Thranduil's 'human' name seems a bit haphazard; for at least four paragraphs I thought Lee was a separate character. I might just be missing something no one else did, but it was confusing. Aside from that, this is always a compelling premise, and you have executed it well thus far. (I am also admittedly biased toward authors who leave Legolas's mother alive, but that's a different story.) Farewell! | |
| Noor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/19/2017 |
| Intriguing first chapter. Leaves me wishing for more so that's always a good sign. I haven't read your other story so these are "fresh eyes". Thank you and keep writing. | |