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Of Closed and Open Doors  by WhiteTree 4 Review(s)
losselenReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/7/2021
beautiful story gracefully told! i too am a bit jolted by the suddenness of the end---perhaps it shall be fleshed out at some future point, but beautiful story nonetheless.

KathReviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/8/2021
I loved the idea of there being a second female fighter in the War of the Ring.
Liked your two new characters, but SO disappointed you killed them off. Was looking forward to a happy ending with them getting together to console each other over the loss of their spouses.

sueReviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/17/2021
What a meloncholly tale. It is so well done,
until the abrupt end. Perhaps you thought it would be
dramatic; or perhaps you just got tired of writing it.
I can't be the only one that hoped to see Halel and Galron
redeemed by love for each other. But such, I guess are
the winds of war.





UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/15/2021
Beautifully written!

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