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| The White Horse and the White Banner by Chigger | 2 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 12/7/2003 |
| I'm glad she shared her secret with her brother and I also hope she tells her parents. She will need their support if this illness continues. Author Reply: I didn't know how to put that in there, but between this chapter and the next, she did approach her parents and they now know all about it. I'm the kind of kid that doesn't want to leave home or rebel against my parents in any way. Therefore, neither do my characters. So the entire family knows of it now. | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 12/3/2003 |
| Short, but sweet. :) Hirilian's character does seem quite different from when she first encounters Ceorl, and it was hard to imagine her in tears like that. Then again, that must be what happens when you're in love with someone. :) How long until Ceorl recovers? Author Reply: Ceorl is still in bed, but his fate will soon be known. :) I'm glad you liked it. I, myself, have never been in love and I was hoping this chapter would not come off as corny since I know almost nothing about that which I write. ;) | |