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The Shadow in the Past  by Itarille 2 Review(s)
periantariReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/23/2024
This is a really interesting scene and consideration of if Faramir knew that Denethor used the palantir and a good conversation about how it'll be if Faramir had persuaded Denethor to not do so. I liked how you said he used it to see where Boromir is which makes sense.
I do like the Faramir and Denethor relationship you describe here. And your character voices are very well written.
This is a great story and i enjoyed the earlier parts as well. The chapter of Finduilas passing was heart-breaking.

Author Reply: Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate that you could still enjoy my story, even though (based on some of your stories) you have different interpretation of our Steward.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/19/2024
This is an absolutely stunning chapter. The Professor would be proud.

Author Reply: Thank you, that is high praise indeed. You are very kind.

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