| The Last Maker by Ecthelion of the fountain | 2 Review(s) |
| Eruanneh_Luin | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/10/2026 |
| A timeless wood, three personages (who are they?), the (perhaps) demise of a subtle, concealed enemy; tangled in a mind confounded and despairing. How well you bring this chapter to a close. |
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| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 2/15/2025 |
Was that a jump-scare, or did he actually see Annatar coming out from behind the tree? In my mind, it would have made a very effective jump-scare on screen… ;-) Also, your description of his eyes came through very vividly.
Hmm … I’m not sure what I think is happening here. Perhaps Annatar was meeting with the orcs and had told them to shoot him if they were discovered (as a cover)? We shall see… |
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