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The Last Maker  by Ecthelion of the fountain 2 Review(s)
Eruanneh_LuinReviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/10/2026
A timeless wood, three personages (who are they?), the (perhaps) demise of a subtle, concealed enemy; tangled in a mind confounded and despairing. How well you bring this chapter to a close.

PSWReviewed Chapter: 7 on 2/15/2025
Was that a jump-scare, or did he actually see Annatar coming out from behind the tree? In my mind, it would have made a very effective jump-scare on screen… ;-) Also, your description of his eyes came through very vividly.

Hmm … I’m not sure what I think is happening here. Perhaps Annatar was meeting with the orcs and had told them to shoot him if they were discovered (as a cover)? We shall see…

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