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| Shadow by fael bain | 2 Review(s) |
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| Elven_lady14 | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 11/20/2004 |
| Whats with the whole Yoda talk thing? ou are saying thiongs like, Served me well have you, and its driving me NUTZ! Author Reply: Really sorry about that, it's part of the reason why I'm re-writing it! I've removed the older, bad chapters so that it's not as messy, and confusing! My new material has only gone up to Chapter 16 now, and I promise there's not a single Yoda-esque phrase there! =) x | |
| Findulas | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 12/7/2003 |
| I like your story, but I cannot help but be distracted, at times very distracted by the way the Elves speak. They totally sound like Yoda! I concentrate more on that than on the words they are actually saying. Your story otherwise is very lyrical and well written. | |