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| Unblinded by Victoria | 1 Review(s) |
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| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/10/2003 |
| I have decided to review each of your chapters. :-) A fantastic beginning. Forever and a half... That's a wonderful phrase. I'm probably going to find myself whispering that sometime. :D I'm glad that you kept both of the twins in the story. I can't imagine them separated. It's great how you have managed to give them separate identities, such as the earing and the hair. Also, Elladan seems more like the older brother, at least in this chapter. Yes, I agree, I don't believe that the Professor pictured his elves ears quite as pointed as they have been depicted. Hm...the eyes...so old and full of wisdom. What would it be like to meet an elf, I wonder? Lovely begining. | |