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Little Ones of Their Own  by Pearl Took 5 Review(s)
WhiteLadyReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/23/2003
I love this story.I love it when Pippin talks to Theo, it's just so...Pippin. And his memories of Lorien and the flet and the second chapter just made me fall in love with Pippin all over again. And then the third chapter his reaction to the news. It was just beautiful. He kissed her tummy, and he wanted to make sure that the baby knew that it's father loved him(or her for Diamond's sake).That made me cry. And then when he tells Merry "I'm having a baby!" And Merry goes "*You're* having a baby?" That was just funny. But the talks that Pip has with Theo have to be my favorite. Telling him about how hobbits don't go back on their words and how Theo and Pip's son will grow up just like him and Merry. Wonderful!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/9/2003
Oh, Pippin's shocked (and quiet) reaction was so perfect! And this...

"A baby, Merry! A baby! I'm having a baby!"

Adorable.

Samwisegirl12Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/8/2003
Yay! Pip and Diamond finally got what they wanted! that bit with merry's baby (whose name escapes me) asking for a baby for them. Keep it up! This is SUCH a cute story!

~ swg ~

Zebra WallpaperReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/8/2003
Oh, I had been waiting for this! What a lovely, lovely end to the story. Seriously, my heart just sang as I read this, I was just so happy for them. You really brought us into their emotions in this story and that's no easy task. Wonderful, Pearl, just wonderful. Thank you for wrtiting this.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/7/2003
I was so pleased to see a new chapter. You are doing a wonderful job with this lovely story. I can't wait for more.

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