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The Green Knight  by Le Rouret 6 Review(s)
Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/20/2003
"Eat first, conspire later!" Truer words were ne'er spoken. I am loving this!


Saber Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/8/2003
And so another thread has been woven into this tangled little web...


*scratches head*


Well you've still got me completely lost...howzabout dropping a few more clue in the very near future? *grins*

Author Reply: Sorry, Saber! If my family has to wait for the updates, so do you!

Oh, all right; here's a hint: It's not the horse. Okay?

Le Rouret

LamielReviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/8/2003
Ah, this gets better and better. So another attempt to sow dissension and rile bad feelings against Legolas. It seems that whoever is doing this doesn't know his enemy that well, though, or else he'd just tell everyone about the Elf and that'd be it.

Lovely detail with Gimli and Bandobras in this chapter. Especially the note about the rain washing a gully in the mud -- good drainage is just the sort of thing that we modern readers take for granted. Bandy also seems to be growing and developing as a character. It's a pleasure to see him interacting on a strong basis with the other esquire -- he's much more than Legolas' pet.

Wonderful chapter, as always, and I'm looking forward to further developments. Thank you.

TinnuialReviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/8/2003
This gets better and better....or rather...worse and worse for the poor Green Knight!!!

The image of Legolas singing and splashing in the tub is....amusing... LOL!!! I can't imagine he's too upset regarding these arrangmements...

I'm beginning to wish updates came more often that once a week...but that only serves to prove how masterfully you are weaving this mystery around us!!!
Thank you for the new chapter...
:)

CorielReviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/8/2003
So the plot just continues to thicken . . . Someone seems to have too much time on their hands, to say the very least. Thankfully, I had had lunch already, so Bandy didn't taunt me much! Though all that did sound better than sausage in a microwave. ^_^

*Nice going, Brytta.*

fliewatuetReviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/8/2003
Hm, more mysterious letters were written. And thanks to Brytta's temper, the evidence is destroyed. I don't envy his poor esquire, and I only hope that Brytta won't discover where he has been.

As for the author of those letters, we now know that its neither Hallas of Lossarnach nor Brytta of Rohan. Two down, many more to go ... Faramir and Elessar have to seek the needle in a haystack if they want to shed light upon the whole affair.

BTW could you post a warning at the beginning of the chapter if it contains such a vivid description of the meals that Bandy prepares? That's nothing to read with an empty stomach (or maybe it's the best thing to do?) ... Anyway, my stomach is growling now!

fliewatuet (*off in search for something to eat*)

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