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| Dreams Wrought by Larner | 1 Review(s) |
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| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/9/2025 |
| Oh, yes, it must have been such a relief to see the (good) change in her father and brothers! I hadn't thought of that as a motivation for her dancing when Aragorn first saw her, but it makes sense. Having seen him, she paused, recognizing the worship in the young Man’s eyes, not recognizing as yet the slight stir in her own heart. So many times, we only recognize pivotal moments in retrospect. Nicely done! I'm so glad to see you posting again, and I hope that RL will continue to give you the breathing space to write and post more. For instance, once I've gotten Farry and Ferdi all the way to Gondor, I'm looking forward to reading your Boromir story. Just for starters. (((hugs))) | |