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| The Ride of Eorl by Arnakhor | 1 Review(s) |
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| Sage | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/24/2026 |
| I like that you narrow the battle down to a single soldier. It allows us to understand what it is like to be there. And your descriptive language is great. “had sent over twenty to oblivion" “slaughtering them as their human waves broke upon the death jetties of Gondor’s shields” "the hinge of the door of soldiers now swinging" "his helm and chain mail darkly silvered against the pending storm." | |