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| The Wrong Path by White Wolf | 4 Review(s) |
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| Lady Saruman | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 2/10/2006 |
| cussing! bad grl!!!!!!!! good story so far, i'm enjoying it immensely. ^_^ | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 12/14/2003 |
| Well well! I return to the computer to find two more chapters! But first things first... Poor Legolas! Poor Thranduil! (Did you call that, or what?) How traumatic for my poor baby, finding out his mother died like that! *sniff sniff* *Wahhhhhh!!* And poor Legolas, not knowing that his body still retains the poison! I suspected some kind of thing where Mordraug could activate the poison, but your stunning manner of delivery took me completely by surprise, especially because the reader's awareness of Legolas' illness tends to diminish in the hubbub of the news about Legolas' mother. I'm lovin' it! Author Reply: I try hard d to keep everyone a little off balance by doing things a little different than the readers might expect. Glad I succeeded here. I wanted to focus on Legolas's mother and then slam the news about the poison in Legolas's system at the end of the chapter. I'm thrilled you are lovin' it. I think that there will be more coming that will surprise you. It's my intention anyway. :o) | |
| Orophins Dottir | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 12/11/2003 |
| Yikes! I am definitely going to have to summon the finest warriors of Taur-E-Ndaedelos to kick a little butt here. Yours or Mordraug's I haven't quite decided. To kill first his Naneth and then leave foul poison within Legolas? Sounds like WAR to me. Tell that jerk Aragorn to get busy comforting our prince. I am summoning the healer Haldir from mine own stories! Hang in there, fair Prince! Those that love thee yet ride! Humble (and very irate) Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil Author Reply: If you are already planning on possibly kicking my butt, I can't imagine what you will do, when you keep reading the story. Should I start gathering my own warriors right now? Fear not, Aragorn has been alerted. However, tell Haldir to stay in Lorien. He will not be able to help. Sorry. "Hang in there, fair Prince! Those that love thee yet ride!" Remember that line later on. You'll know when. :o) | |
| Sivan | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 12/11/2003 |
| Legolas found the truth in the hard way, so I can see. The conflict between Thranduil and Legolas was so... sory, a I lost my words, it was so good. Poor Legolas, the poison it's still in his body. I still love what I read. When there will be the next update? I've got your e-mail, did you have mine? Keep them coming... Sivan Goodluck. Author Reply: That was indeed a hard way for Legolas to find out how his mother really died. He will have some issues with his father over it. The poison is still with Legolas, unfortunately for him. I try to update every couple of days, barring any problems. I got your e-mail. I'd also love to visit Israel. | |