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| Lost by FirstMate | 2 Review(s) |
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| Iawen Londea | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/15/2003 |
| I never tire of read this story. LOL. And yes I did notice about your rewrite in the last chapter. You know I was thinking a few weeks ago.... There is always so much I want to say about each chapter that I've loved and stuff but by the time I get to the review button there's always something I forget to say. Like I remember reading the part where Elrohir is wary of horses, doesn't like to be near them, and I think I almost cried lol, but I completely forgot to mention it in the review, and then in the next chapter I saw you mention to someone else that you were surprised she was the only one to say something. LOL. Anyways, I love Aragorn's devotion to his brother, and I feel so badly for him later on in the fic! Both of them lol. Hopes for a new chapter soon. =D Author Reply: Again, thanks so much for reviewing here even though these chapters are "old." I always am so pleased to see that I have a review...it makes my day! I also like Aragorn's devotion to Elrohir, even though he doesn't show it as much in the later chapters. The one I'm working on right now (chp 11) will show a lot more interaction between the two. I'm hoping to get it out soon! | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/13/2003 |
| I *still* love this story! I'm so glad you're posting it here as well. I noticed you re-wrote the part about Aragorn and the rangers - it sounds better now. I just wish you'd update the next chapter of the version on ff.net! Every time I see an update on SoA I get excited - but it's a repeat! I'm also transferring stories here - check out 'Telparian' and 'With Friends Like These'! Jay (Only 4 days to go!!) Author Reply: Hi Jay! I'm glad you liked the rewrite. I'm doing some minor editing as I post these chapters to fix things I didn't like about the way I wrote them the first time. I AM working on chapter 11...I promise. It's being a bit frustrating at the moment, though. I just decided last night to scrap several pages because I didn't like how it was turning out and now I have to rewrite it all. Ugh. My goal is still to post before Christmas (but I have to see how the holidays cooperate). Hey...I'm still waiting anxiously for the next chapter of 'The Search!' | |