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The Wrong Path  by White Wolf 2 Review(s)
EruannaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/15/2003
Man, I hate our computer. You're going along, minding your own business, when *POOF!* it kicks you off and won't reboot! *sigh* But enough about that! The computer's back up! (For now!) This is so sweet! I love the portrayal of frienship in this chapter. Excellent usage of the notion of 'silence when words are not enough'. And I love the way Aragorn just falls asleep like that. You are left with a unmistakable feeling of peace. But I have a feeling that the said feeling of peace is not going to last long. ;-) Keep going!

Author Reply: I hope your computer is behaving itself. It sounds like your ISP is acting up. I have a local ISP, and it is very stable.

I've always felt that silence between friends, who thoroughly understand each other, can sometimes say far more than word

Now, how did you know that peaceful feeling wouldn't last? :o) I can say no more, but I just posted Chapter Twelve not five minutes ago.

SivanReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/14/2003
You show us the strong of Friendship, that was so good, between Legolas and Aragorn/Estel.

I can't wait to next chapter.

I still love what I read, just keep them coming,

Sivan

Author Reply: I love the friendship between Legolas and Estel, so that is one of the main themes of the story.

I will, indeed, keep the chapters coming. Another one tomorrow.

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