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| The White Horse and the White Banner by Chigger | 2 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/19/2003 |
| I think that this chapter was wonderful practice for Ceorl, Captain of the Riddermark, lots os "I do's" said during the ceremony so he will be ready for the wedding. Just hope the bride is getting a chance to practice. I am ahppy to review and to read your stories. I never fail to be entertained by them. Until I started reading your fictions, I hadn't given much thought to the humans in all of this, but I do now. Author Reply: Don't worry about Hirilian. Women being what they are, she no doubt already has the entire wedding planned out in her head and she's got her lines memorized. :) Ceorl's probably going to wait until the day before to even think about it. :D Glad you enjoy them. I'm now working on two more stories which you have inspired. You said Belecthor should have a girl friend, and so I'm currently working on that. The next story to go up will be centered around Morwen, though. She's cute. :) | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/16/2003 |
| Well, the ceremony was certainly different from what I would expect, but it's certainly not anti-canonical, either. One thing, though, is that the King would probably not ask if anyone had any objections to Ceorl being a captain, because if there were objections, than it would show in the face of the public that the King made a mistake in choosing him, which wouldn't do to well for public relations, if you know what I mean. :) I look forward to seeing the next chapter. Author Reply: I'm glad the ceremony didn't come of as terrible. Like I've told you before, I dislike the fact that most Rohirric "ceremonies" are rather informal and toned down. :) Next chapter should be up very soon. I just got done re-reading it and it might go up today or tomorrow. | |