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| Journey's End by Nilmandra | 1 Review(s) |
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| rgbj | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/17/2004 |
| Legolas is certainly surrounded by love and he is Tathiel's fishy baby. Tinania is settling in nicely now. Earundra is getting much better thanks to the pool and care of the healer. Legolas is recovering from his bad day. I think it would be a really good idea to slowly introduce Legolas to men. He needs to come to grips with the concept of good men sometime. Tathiel is still in the minus column. Legolas is still drawing too much energy from her. Nesta said the right things. No one no matter how strong would have been able to do what she did and then bear another child. Ethiwen said the right things and pushed Tathiel a little more in the right direction. Everyone is trying so hard to help them all. Legolas adores his ada. So sweet. But still Legles misses Tathiel. The family certainly worked hard for Tathiel's date to work. And work it did. We have a wedding/bonding to look forward to now. I liked your AN. I read quite a bit of fan fiction and I don't mind AUs that would probably drive a purist insane. I do like it though when a writer does his/her homework and gives us as canon as they can work into their tale. The idea of the parents fear being used to maintain a child is one I really like. Being a parent I know how much energy goes into just one child. I feel that the concept of the fear of the parents being shared in a three fold cord is crucial to elven family life. Anyway thank you for that AN and the concept being used in your story. | |