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Return From the Void  by Miriel 2 Review(s)
stearchicaReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/24/2003
Hey! sorry it took me so long to review! but i am following this story, i really like it!!! Your dark lords are so funny, I cant explain, it sort of makes sense they would act like that, :)!
Eldarion is cute! Silly Arwen, unaware of her son's manipulations, but then again, most parents are!! hehehe!! >:)


Author Reply: That's ok! Sorry it took so long to get back to you.

Yup, power corrupts the dark lords, and they have trouble getting along.

More Eldarion is coming up. I finally posted Chapter 6 today, and there is a nice bit about unaware Arwen and manipulating Eldarion.

Thank so much for your reviews!

brynReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/20/2003
For some reason, Eldarion's block thoughts struck me as hilarious. I'm still giggling over them. OOoh, that kaniving (um, is that how you spell it?) little monster! On one hand, Melkor (or shall I call him Melki) is attempting to take over the world, and on the other, little Eldarion already has... ;)

Author Reply: I never thought of it that way...thanks Bryn. :) Yes, just wait until they kidnap him! :o They truly have no idea what they are getting themselves into... And just for you, (Ok, fine, my amusement as well), we shall continue to reveal more of Eldarion's thoughts to take over the world.

BTW, thanks for the review. I was beginning to feel very sorry for myself over having no reviews. :) Thank you for bringning me back from that awful fate. :D

I must go read latest chapter of "Cantrip," and you must update Marinas Stiria soon!

Merry Christmas to you!

Author Reply: Chapter 6 is up now. :D

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