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Shire: Beginnings  by Lindelea 2 Review(s)
PSWReviewed Chapter: 14 on 2/7/2025
Oh no!! I hope Pick is okay!

Author Reply: Well, things are pretty touch-and-go at this point, but Someone is watching over Pick, so I'm sure that helps.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/1/2004
Oh dear! I hope poor Pick is not lost for good!

This chapter is marvelous. I love all the little details, describing the changing countryside, and the differences between the lands they find themselves in and the one they left. I could just see that little mountainside clearing with the wild herbs and the strawberried.

Author Reply: I'm so glad! I scrutinized JRRT's descriptions in The Hobbit and LOTR for a long time before I built up enough confidence to write this chapter...

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