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Telparian  by Jay of Lasgalen 5 Review(s)
Guardian Angel of WolvesReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/31/2006
What a wonderful story! The perfect blend of sadness and healing! I applaude you. ;)

KalimaReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/8/2005
Call me an idiot; I didn't realize that the reviews were all exposed that way until I stumbled on the list by accident. I simply never went looking, and I always seem to be in a hurry so I don't notice things I should.

I saw you had only this chapter left, so I finished it. I could use an editor myself about now. Very sweet story, very well done! I thank you again. Good wrap. I also liked seeing Elrond and Thranduil being friends. I'll read more soon.

Author Reply: One of the (many) things I like about this site is the review system, especially being able to reply so easily and quickly. I'm glad you liked this story - it's very angsty, but at least it had a happy ending - though Legolas and Thranduil will always miss Telparian.

washowReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/16/2004
What an incredibly sad and yet sweet tale. I died as you told us how Telparian had died and the reaction of husband and son to their loss. Great job.

Author Reply: I think this is perhaps the saddest of all my stories :(

The sadness will linger for a long time, but they can move on together as long as they have each other.

LKKReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/23/2003
Beautiful. Such a lovely day for Thranduil and Legolas.

I loved the little story within a story about why the King never swims completely unclothed. :-)

The wolfhound pup ending was adorable.

This has been such a touching story all round, Jay. :-)

LKK

KageReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/19/2003
Lovely way to end this story.
Btw, is there any way you can be bribed into writing the story behind that wolfcub incident?

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