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| A Walk to Remember by LOTRFaith | 4 Review(s) |
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| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/20/2003 |
| Oh my! That's an incredibly horrible place to end a chapter...(besides wishing us all a Merry Christmas...) Merry Christmas to you also! Poor Lothgil; I hope she doesn't die of a heart attack... Another touching, well-written chapter! The portrayal of Thranduil's emotions was exquisite. I must say that I am feeling rather unfriendly toward the Easterling's remains... Twelve siblings! Craziness! The largest family that I know personally has nine kids...their names go in alphabetical order; it's pretty cool. And as for grammar: don't sweat it. Grammar is a nasty little monster. I am homeschooled, but I took a writing class last year. My teacher (hilarious woman) claims that the man responsible for grammar sat in bed at night thinking of ways to best torture poor, helpless English students... Post soon! Author Reply: You are welcome;-) I was going to continue with what I had planned, but then the chapter would have been at least another 6 pages to the 14 pages I already had. So, I figured I didn't want to scare anyone off;-) No, Lothgil is a tough girl and won't die. Nope:-D lol. Yes the Easterling's remains are about to get thrown into the woods for the wargs. I think everyone hates him. Including me. How did I ever create such a monster to hurt Legolas? Yes, twelve siblings and nine nieces and nephews. Crazy I tell you. Ahhh, thank you. Rather interesting, but I am homeschooled as well. This is my last year thankfully:-) That claim is very true. Just like Algebra and Geometry, and Chemisty and Trigahowyouspellit. lol. I will post on Sat. ;-) Thanks for the review! | |
| Nikara | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/20/2003 |
| I feel so sorry for Legolas. At least it didn't get too far. I'm glad he is fully unconscious now. He won't feel the pain. Great job with Thranduil's emotions! Author Reply: Yes, Legolas is rather a sorry sight. Thank you much! I really was trying hard to type it just right and I actually can't believe that I actually wrote it! lol. Silly me. I think it is my favorite chapter so far:-D Thanks for the review! | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/20/2003 | |
| merry christmas to you too! i thought this would be the last ch. but i guess not! great chapter! Author Reply: Thank you! No, the last chapter wasn't the last chapter. Legolas still has yet to get back to the realm as does Thalion. And Legolas will be fully healed when I'm finished with the story. I'm glad you like it! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/20/2003 |
| This was a good chapter, Faith. Your picture of Legolas suffering was very touching. Actually, you did a good job with all your story lines. I thought that Thorinell was probably deceiving Lothgil about his feelings! Author Reply: Thank you (blush) You know after all the complitments I am still so not used to them? lol. Yes, I was very depressed after writting that chapter. It didn't help I was listening to some depressing music as well. You know they say music is the voice to your soul? Well, after listening to some very deep depressing music while I was writting certainly helped;-) Yes Thorinell was deceiving Lothgil about his true feelings. I battled a bit over that scene, trying not to make it too cheesy. I still hope it didn't come out that way:-\. Thanks for the review! | |