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| Lost by FirstMate | 2 Review(s) |
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| Arquen | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/23/2003 |
| Hello again! The mistakes I mentioned in my last review are just very minor ones, where either the a couple of words are mixed up, or else there seems to be a word missing. This chapter has an example: "Even as he’d grown up, he had loved being around horses had become renowned for his instinctive connection with even the most difficult of animals." I'm not sure if you meant to put the word 'and' in there, but it just caught my eye. Didn't mean for my comment to come across as some kind of put down. It was just a comment. Enjoyed this chapter throughly. I was feeling as frustrated with Elrohir as Elladan and Estel are! Look forward to more. Author Reply: Oh! Typos? Oops...I do proof my story, but it is so hard to catch everything. I thought you meant that I had messed up something to do with Tolkein-lore. And I didn't take it as a put-down...I really do appreciate it when readers (who obviously have a LOT more knowledge of such things than I do) tell me how to improve my story. Anyway, I do appreciate the review very much! | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/22/2003 |
| I love this story. I'm an Elrohir-fan, so I pretty much read anything about them that I can get my hands on. I loved this story so much that I went over to Ff.n and read the rest of it there. :) This is excellent. :) Hm...other than gushing over how wonderful this story is, I'm at a loss for things to say. So, cheers! Author Reply: Hey, I love gushing! Makes all the time it takes to write this story worthwhile! On a serious note, I am glad you found the story and like it. I, too, enjoy stories of the twins and decided several months ago to try my hand at writing one as well. It's been an interesting and rewarding experience so far, made so by the lovely people who choose to review. Thanks! | |