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With Friends Like These  by Jay of Lasgalen 2 Review(s)
LKKReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/23/2003
One of the things I love about your writing, Jay, is how your chapters turn so quickly and so convincing from fun-loving adventure to threatening danger. I was reminded again of this talent of yours during this chapter.

I'm enjoying getting reaquainted with the earlier chapters of this story. :-)

LKK

SivanReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/23/2003
Nice continue, more please.

I still love what I read, just keep them coming,

Sivan

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