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While We Dwelt in Fear  by Pearl Took 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/13/2005
Ah, at last the fight between the ruffians and the folk of Bree has been very successfully described. Excellently written.

Beethovens7thReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/28/2004
oh, oh dear, oh my. I'm not sure what to say. I thought my story showed evil, but wow, that poor hobbit. suffocated with snow. Oh dear. such evil. Not sure i'll be able to sleep now. egad. how dreadful! Puts faces to the nameless dead though doesn't it? when you hear numbers, it doesn't hit home quite so much. but to know a bit about the dear hobbit, and then to have such a Cruel death. egad. Well done ickyness deary!

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/22/2004
Let me get a hold of that Yegen!! Like Pipkin mentioned, I'd like to hurt the jerkwad who messes with my hobbits!

I'm so happy to see new chapters--you've been busy!

PF

PervincaReviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/2/2004
Yay! I've been waiting for an update of this story for ages! Well, maybe not that long, but still! Very good! Especially the scene in Bree, with the deaths of the two hobbits and three men. I was so impressed when I checked the names you had used! I'll be waiting (probably quite impatiently) for another update soon, dear sister!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/2/2004
Oh, this chapter is so descriptive of the chill and danger settling over the Shire. I can't wait until the Travellers return and set all to rights!

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/1/2004
An interesting look at the events in Bree that Barliman reports. Keep writing!

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