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| All Is Fair in Love and War by Chigger | 2 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/6/2004 |
| [Narion led his men valiantly, straight into the middle of the enemy forces, his sword flashing in the sunlight, his battle cry ringing through the air.] My hero! I just love this guy! [Narion led his men valiantly, straight into the middle of the enemy forces, his sword flashing in the sunlight, his battle cry ringing through the air.] What an image! I can see this when I read it. [Narion was offering encouragement and advice, finding those that needed care for their wounds and directing the healers to them.] Everyone's hero! [Narion fell to the ground, an arrow protruding from his shoulder, his stallion galloping back to camp.] Easy now, too close for comfort! Well, don't just sit there, get Narion to safty and medical attention. He needs you! I will be waiting on the next chapter. Author Reply: For now, Narion is under the care of Ostoher while I journey back to Ithilien. :) Don't worry, he's a tough little booger with a long happy life ahead of him. I'm glad you enjoyed the battle. I've always thought of Narion as the leader, warrior type, and so it was only natural that he be the one to charge the very mouth of the beast, even though his father told him not to. ;) | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/5/2004 |
| Well, even though I've read it already, good job. :) But, you aren't going to do anyting mean to Ostoher, are you? I've grown to like the guy. Author Reply: He just seems like a very likable guy, because he's kind of grown on me too. :) No, I plan on using him in my next story, so I can't do anything *too* bad to him. | |