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| The Wrong Path by White Wolf | 5 Review(s) |
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| nat | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 7/17/2004 |
| okay...so mean! ::sniff::sniff:: you made me freakin bawl, man...oh whyyy... Author Reply: I remember Chapter 21 as containing Legolas's letter to his father. I didn't intend on being mean, I just wanted to bring out that kind of emotion in my readers. Keep going, and you'll continue to see what I mean. :o) Thanks for the review. | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 1/13/2004 |
| I don't have time to write a detailed review right now...I will be more thorough about it when I review the next chapter. For now, suffice it to say that I L-O-V-E this chapter, and Legolas' letter to Thranduil made me cry, despite my best efforts. As I said, I'll review this chapter next time. Keep up the good work! Author Reply: I made myself cry with this letter just like I did with the one to Aragorn. I also made Thranduil cry. Mercy, I must control myself. I don't own a hanky concession, though maybe I should get one. There will be more hanky moments ahead. I'm looking forward to whatever else you have to say. | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 1/12/2004 |
| AW! this is so sad!!! Author Reply: That was my aim. I love for my readers to bring out the hankies occasionally. :o) | |
| *~SuGaR~* | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 1/11/2004 |
| ...*sniff, sniff*...WAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniff*...ok...finally, Legolas' letter to his father!!!!!! even though he had accepted it already.....it's still so sad!!!!!!!! hope they get to that forest soon, don't drag it out too long, please!!!!!!! i don't follow many stories, only one so far that turned out to be 50 chapters long!!!!! still luv it and can't wait!!!!!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!! *SuGaR~* Author Reply: I'm glad you liked the letter. It seemed to have had the desired effect. :o) I don't think this story will end up being 50 chapters long, however, it will be a long one with many more chapters to come. I hope you stick around for all of it. | |
| Sivan | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 1/10/2004 |
| More please. You wrote the letter with full emotional that filled inside, and you did it well. I'm understood Thranduil for crying. I still love what I read. You could at least gave a warning about the tissue. Sivan Author Reply: You knew Thranduil's letter was coming, but I didn't say which chapter it would be in. Sorry about that. Yes, after reading that letter plus thinking he was about to lose his youngest child, it is easy to see why Thranduil would cry. He may be a strong king, but he's also a loving father, and I've tried to portray him that way. I'm glad you liked the letter. I tried to get Legolas's feelings across without getting to bogged down in detail. You'll be happy to know there will be no more letters like that. But... | |