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| A Walk to Remember by LOTRFaith | 3 Review(s) |
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| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/16/2004 |
| Well...umm...er...WOW! Where do I start? First of all, the conversation between Thranduil and Legolas at the beginning of the chapter made me cry, as such things are wont to do. I have never been very good at writing really emotional thoughts and words, but your passages just blow me away. I love it! Thalion - on his way to recovery (?) and not endearing himself to many horses. ;-) Poor Thorinell. Poor, heartsick Thorinell. Uh oh. Is Miriwen in trouble?!? Lothgil is kind of amusing in her bewildered boy trouble. ;-) And each new revelation about Legolas brings some new terror. I feel so sorry for him! Poor guy. Everyone tortures him. (It's so fun!) Ah yes. The almost never-ending battle of school. I know all too well what you mean. Fortuantely, my delays are a bit happier than yours seem to be. I was at camp last weekend, and this Saturday I'm going to be in LaCrosse, havin' lots of fun! (Then I return to my math on Monday. Stink.) More please! Author Reply: lol. I love how you can just help me out! You not only encourage me with your wonderful reviews, but you also give me a reason not to abandon this story:-) Yes, Thalion is on his way to full recovery, and no he isn't endearing himself to many horses;-) But having been on one for several weeks, I think he is getting quite sick of looking at them! lol. Yes, poor Thorinell! And what's worse, he doesn't know that his mother sent the letter that he thought he had thrown away! lol. I still laugh at that. No, Miriwen isn't in trouble, just a little heartsick for her husband. Yes Lothgil is rather amusing in her bewildered boy troubles, actually (a behind the story, story) I based her off of my younger sister who is currently having boy troubles so she is rather easy to emulate her into Lothgil:-) And yes, everyone likes (for some odd reason;-) to torture Legolas. The poor elf. Never ending school. (Sigh) I am glad this is my last year. :-D But, I noticed you are going to LaCrosse. Is that in Wisconsin? Or do you mean the game LaCrosse? Very curious now:-) Thank you ever so much for the review~! | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2004 | |
| Anouther excellent chapter! I liked Thalion's part! cant wait until your next post! Author Reply: Thank you very much! I've seen the word excellent chapter so much, it's permantly etched within my mind! lol. I'm glad you like Thalion, I like him too:-) lol. Posting will probably be delayed until Sunday's, since I now have a beta reader:-) Thanks for the review! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2004 |
| I've been out of town and just found this update. I'm glad I did because it's really good. I love the way you are developing the relationships between all the characters, particularly Thranduil and Legolas, but also all of Legolas's brothers and sisters and their various ties. Legolas is really having trouble dealing with what he went through. Author Reply: Ahh:-) Well, it was a little late and unbeta-ed, but oh well. I'm glad you like it! I was having trouble in tying everything in... Still am..:-) But after each chapter I am thrilled to see that many (I hope) people liked it and are still waiting for more:-D Yes Legolas is having quite a bit of trouble dealing with everything, it's hard when everything piles up, leaving you to deal with it all at once. Fortunatly, Legolas has his older brother and father there;-) Glad to see you back! | |