| To fool an Elf by frodo16424 | 4 Review(s) |
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| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/19/2004 |
| Ha! Estel hid in plain sight! That always throws us when we seek deception :/ |
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| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/14/2004 |
| Rivendell's been punk'd! This is way too funny, even better than a pile of hobbits. I can't wait to see what Estel comes up with next. |
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| Kathira | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/13/2004 |
| Another good trick! These kinds of things are hard to write, because they take more imagination than the usual sort of story, but you are doing very well. Excellent work, very well-written and clever. I just have a question/quibble on the this last one, however. Was Estel the scout who came to tell Elrond about the party with the injured man? I could believe he went back and forth, guiding the twins and Glorfindel without being recognized. But if it was, it wasn't very nice of you not to mention that he went with them! I suppose I'll have to wait with Elladan and Elrohir for the fuller explanation in the next chapter. Can't wait! |
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| tmelange | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/13/2004 |
| This is so very clever! I look forward to reading more! |
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