Amazing! You have written this first chapter very well, and I enjoyed every minute of it. Her saddness at the loss of her child, and her anger mingled with her sorrow at the loss of her husband were very vivid and almost tangible. Her fear for Eomer was very touching, for it was obvious she loved him almost as a mother, something I feel he would have needed during the dark days of Theoden's poisening.
I hope to return and finish this story as soon as I can. Right now, however, I must go to dinner. |
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