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| Merry's Decision by PIppinfan1988 | 1 Review(s) |
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| babzee | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 1/19/2004 |
| Your story is compelling, and I'm enjoying it very much. But you need to do some more editing or maybe have someone beta it, to catch little mistakes like this one: Paladin quietly gently Merry’s back while he sobbed into his pillow. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing how this story ends. Author Reply: Thank you, and I know I shouldn't be editing late in the evening, but that's just what I was doing last night...so sorry. I was tired and shouldn't have been editing, but I was and I did. Thanks for pointing that error out and I will go back and comb over the entire chapter...when I wake up more fully! :-X Beta? (Smiling) Are you volunteering?? Because I sure could use one, but I don't know of any... It's not so bad editing other's work, but it's difficult doing your own projects because as a friend put it, your mind is already inserting the words... Thanks again. Pippinfan Author Reply: Oh...! Boy, you were right--I caught more than one error myself. Hope I got them all. My apologies for posting that one so wrecklessly. The next time I feel myself too tired to edit, I promise to put my pen down. Pippinfan | |