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| False Faces by Alisha B | 2 Review(s) |
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| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/2/2004 |
| hi there, just wanted to say good i think this chapter is, and the whole story. You have done a good job on Elledan and Elrohir, as healers and as elves. A lot of writers have them acting like little elflings, when they are 3000 year old warriors. I also like how they interact with Aragorn. | |
| Rinn | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/26/2004 |
| Hmm, I see many different ways this could work out. But at least Aragorn is all fixed up now, even if he is a little tired and sore. I'm glad the twins sat him down and made him see that he was wrong about not wanting to help Gandalf. You did a very good job with that part, I think. They let him come to his own conclusions. I think that helps keep him in character better! (not that there was a problem, mind you) Ah, shoot, I have to run to class, but I just wanted to drop a review and tell you that I enjoyed this chapter! Keep up the good work! | |