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| Frodo's Bane and Pippin's Stomach by Analyn | 4 Review(s) |
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| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/1/2007 |
| "So warm," Frodo murmured, drawing closer to what he perceived to be an enviable source of heat. Pippin tightened his protective hold on his cousin, and felt his eyes well up with tears upon realizing that he hadn't felt this cold since the snow-ball fight with Merry last Yule. "Thank you for keeping me warm, Pip," Frodo whispered leaning his head against the tween's shoulder. Pippin tried to hide the built-up tears as he readjusted the blankets around his sick ward. "You're welcome, dear Frodo." More love! Thank you. What a blessing for Frodo. Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/30/2004 |
| What an experience for Pippin! He's growing up so fast on this trip. And I do love this... "Frodo’s strength may have been diminishing, but his will and determination were about as strong and stubborn as ever." | |
| EllyBaggins | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/25/2004 |
| awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...this is such a lovely chapter! can't wait for the next one! i prayed by the way, best of luck! | |
| Mysterious Jedi | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/21/2004 |
| Good story. One thing I noticed is that "dialated blue pupils" makes no sense. Pupils are the black part, irises are the colored part. Author Reply: I KNEW that didn't sound right! Thanks for the tip. I just corrected that part. | |