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Of a Father and Son  by sheraiah 10 Review(s)
Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 4/11/2013
absolutely awesome couldn't stop reading til i had finished

rickReviewed Chapter: 23 on 12/29/2011
Really good story - I enjoyed it very much, evil cliffies & all. Thanks for writing!

GunnhildrReviewed Chapter: 23 on 5/17/2007
I'm glad I pestered you with my messages and that you answered, for this is truly a great story. I really liked it, and as it was much easier to read it was very enjoyable. Good job done, on this one :) I'll make sure to chek out your other ones.

DaynawaynaReviewed Chapter: 23 on 4/30/2007
Wow, GREAT story Sheraiah! I really enjoyed it a lot. It almost felt like 2 separate stories wound as one, and it was really neat. The orc attack to Leggy being healed was the first part and the attack on the Keep (and successive attacks on our beloved elves) to the end would be the 2nd part. Very well Done. I did think it was Saruman, only because the assassin had seen "a flash of white" from the cloaked man. And of course, leave it to me to question ages in my review 2 chapters before you explain the ages of Legolas and Estel! LOL And the 'face-in-the-mud' bit... boys will be boys, whether elf or human! And I really would love to see more of Leggy's visits to Lilia as she grows; does he give his blessing to her marriage to Daeren? (OK.. DUH! LOL)

But I have to say, I think my FAVORITE line has to be this:
“Come, Ada. I would introduce you to the remaining Fellowship.” He drew his father to the door of the study. “Oh, and Ada, please be polite to the dwarf. He is my friend.”
Hee hee! So full of meaning! LOVED it! :)

Wonderful, wonderful story my dear. Keep it up! Oh, and don't be surprised by the sudden influx of reviews from me-- a loooong, slow day at work prompted me to sift thru your stories and I read several that day... and am just getting around to reviewing. :)

God Bless,

Dayna :)

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 23 on 5/1/2004
I liked reading this story, very exciting. If only i had come across it sooner! Now i shall read your other stories...
-sofia

websterReviewed Chapter: 23 on 4/5/2004
I never reviewed this? Then I'm a stinky reader, because this is fan-tastic!

mistry89Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 2/8/2004
Just finished it, lovely. lovely, lovely.
Cheers,
Helen

TinnuialReviewed Chapter: 23 on 1/25/2004
That was so lovely....I've enjoyed this story so much over the last few months, and really am quite sad that the it has come to its end...
Thank you for sharing your writing with us all! I look forward to your future work with much anticipation....
:)

FadesintothewestReviewed Chapter: 23 on 1/25/2004
SO it ends, I cannot say at least b/c that means no more, but hopefully you will bring us more of your brilliant Legolas.

Gimli and Legolas' relationship was spot on, their endless banter had me laughing. Yet there was also much sadness as we know how the story ends, but it is a beautiful thing you captured nonetheless, that of friendship and love.
Thanks for sharing your story with us!

SheleighReviewed Chapter: 23 on 1/25/2004
Sheraiah, I have to admit, having sat down and read this from start to finish... I am amazed.

I adored the whole of this beautiful story you have; it has truly been a pleasure to read. Can't wait to see more of your works!

Best wishes,
Sheleigh

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