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Shadows Over Lasgalen  by Jay of Lasgalen 4 Review(s)
mistry89Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/4/2004
Can't review, have to read on, but the recalling of the 3 rules is chilling.

tmelangeReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/29/2004
Great story. Look forward to more.

Author Reply: The next chapter is up now!

Elendiari22Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/29/2004
Oh, dear. Poor Elentia, I hope that nothing too bad happens to her. Hurry and write the next chapter, please!

Author Reply: Poor Elentia indeed. But something bad does happen, I'm afraid.



Author Reply: Poor Elentia indeed. But something bad does happen, I'm afraid.



Author Reply: Sorry about the double reply - my cat just walked across the keyboard!

Jay

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/29/2004
It strikes me that Elentia might be lucky to be unconscious. Or perhaps not. She needs to learn stuff, I guess. I liked her memories of lessons about being captured by Orcs. It sounded so realistic.

Legolas and the others to the rescue, I hope! I am relieved that he's OK.

Author Reply: Poor Elentia. There's worse in store for her. Legolas will 'save' her, but not in the way people will expect.


Jay

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