About Us News Resources Login Become a member Help Search | |
Shadows Over Lasgalen by Jay of Lasgalen | 4 Review(s) |
---|---|
mistry89 | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/4/2004 |
Can't review, have to read on, but the recalling of the 3 rules is chilling. | |
tmelange | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/29/2004 |
Great story. Look forward to more. Author Reply: The next chapter is up now! | |
Elendiari22 | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/29/2004 |
Oh, dear. Poor Elentia, I hope that nothing too bad happens to her. Hurry and write the next chapter, please! Author Reply: Poor Elentia indeed. But something bad does happen, I'm afraid. Author Reply: Poor Elentia indeed. But something bad does happen, I'm afraid. Author Reply: Sorry about the double reply - my cat just walked across the keyboard! Jay | |
daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/29/2004 |
It strikes me that Elentia might be lucky to be unconscious. Or perhaps not. She needs to learn stuff, I guess. I liked her memories of lessons about being captured by Orcs. It sounded so realistic. Legolas and the others to the rescue, I hope! I am relieved that he's OK. Author Reply: Poor Elentia. There's worse in store for her. Legolas will 'save' her, but not in the way people will expect. Jay | |