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| Straight From the Horses' Mouth by Chigger | 3 Review(s) |
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| esamen | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/3/2004 |
| Oh, very nice. I like the way that the story deepens when the reader gets Asfaloth's view of Bill. . . They had with them a delightful pony by the name of Bill, an ignorant young thing who asked an endless string of questions as we traveled together. The story really gains a new dimension with the second point of view added. Author Reply: I always thought Bill was cute, and so Asfaloth just had to say something! :D Thanks for the review! | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/1/2004 |
| I enjoyed this one also. Your horses are very endearing and I liked hearing of this part of the novel from Asfaloth's view-point. I also like that this lovely elf-horse took Bill under his care and enjoyed the pony's comapny. Just a small thought about this Bunny: Are you doing one of the dark horses of the Black Riders????? I note that these animals have been mentioned in both accounts so far and I was wondering if one of them gets a chapter. (Don't hit me too hard.) Author Reply: Thank you. I don't see how anyone could help liking Bill, and Asfaloth is no different. :) I'll take that as a request and see what I can do. :) | |
| coonzalas | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/1/2004 |
| I am really enjoying this story. You post so fast too! Keep writing! coon Author Reply: Ah, well. . . I got excited. :) The next chapter is almost finished, but after that, I've barely started! So, things may slow down now. :) Glad you're enjoying it! | |