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As We Watched, You Slept  by Elendiari22 9 Review(s)
FarawynReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/1/2005
Sad and lovely....... I like the one from Pippin's POV best.

MewsetteReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/30/2004
Bless you, this is wonderful, and I love your portrait of Frodo as seen through the eyes of those who love him.

LossenchristalReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2004
I love it! Beautiful! Very well done!
~Lossenchristal

Elf messengerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2004
That is really good. It is so touching, I like it. You captured the characters personalities very well. Keep up the good work.
Namarie.
Elf messenger

KarenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2004
Wow! FANTASTIC! I am speechless, for once in my life!

Intesity, imagination, true to character, great writing.

You really have a gift. Keep going . . . thanks for the hard work.

Breon BriarwoodReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2004
This is so touching and beautiful! I'm going to go cry now....

Evergreen Girl83Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2004
Beautiful. I was brought to tears by this. Awesome!

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2004
Ah, this is lovely, Elendiari! The POVs seem very accurate to me, and it is all very touching. Thank you!

TatharReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2004
Ohhhhh, I *loved* this, Elendiari!! I'm.... I'm still gasping with delight over it. Oh, it was beautiful -- every POV correct. I could really hear the characters speaking. My favorites were Gimli and Pippin -- Gimli's threats and Pippin's comment about Frodo always having slept like a Took had me giggling and "aww"-ing at the same time, and then Pippin's observation that Frodo looked "beautiful then, just like an Elf" had me smiling *cough*dreamily*cough*... All of it was just wonderful. Definitely going to add this to my favorites... Thanks so much for the delightful read!

*sighs and goes back to read it again*

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