Hello there -- I have to say that I am reading your story in a silly way -- jumping back and forth from chapter to chapter, looking at one aspect and then another. I just want to tell you AGAIN how very much I am enjoying it. I really like this chapter and the one that follows. Yes, they are a little unconnected in the big picture of the whole story, but the scenes, details and dialogue within them are just marvellous. It encourages me to be a better person. Reading and writing fanfic really fills a need in my life. With all the discouraging things going on in the world, I need a little bit of reminding of how to be tender and loving. You have a beautiful touch with showing affection among your characters. Keep it up -- the ability to write like this is a precious gift, and I think that you are going to help a lot of people, even if perhaps you don't always know who they are. |