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| First Meetings by Joee | 3 Review(s) |
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| Araphin | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/17/2004 |
| Don't stop!!! Please!!! Update really really soon!!! Author Reply: Thanks for the review =) | |
| Lera | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/16/2004 |
| I don't know if you tried to make a change on purpose or not, but you did. These last two chapters flowed so much better. You talent at describing the feelings of the moment, was not detracted from by stiff dialogue. Why? Because there wasn't any stiff dialogue! I'll happily look forward to more. While, I'm never too concerned by Leggy cliffhangers,(because after all, he has to survive) I love reading about how he and Aragorn met. Elledan and Elrohir's convo about hoping Legolas and Aragorn would never meet, was quite amusing, and worded in a way that it didn't sound trite. Good job. I have one question though: The rider who was sent ahead of Legolas to tell Elrond he was on his way; what happened to him? Shouldn't he have met Leggy on his way back? Maybe he's still at Imladris? Ciao. Author Reply: I actually didn't try to change anything, it just smoothed itself out on its own. Hmm, since I forgot about him, I guess the rider who was sent ahead of Legolas is resting at Imladris. | |
| tmelange | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/16/2004 |
| How exciting! Great continuation. I'm glad the guys made it back to Rivendell... Author Reply: Thanks for the review =) | |