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| A Dwarf Among Elves by jenolas | 11 Review(s) |
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| galathil | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/7/2011 |
| Thank you for a beautiful story. Galathil | |
| missystar101 | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/11/2008 |
| Great Story, i really love it. I really like the ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!so sad. | |
| Dot | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/14/2004 |
| Well, Gimli’s spirits certainly seem to be revived at the thought of meeting the one whom Legolas loves! It was lovely to see them teasing one another as they’ve always done. I had to laugh at the delight Legolas takes in Gimli’s complete lack of awareness of the love lives of his friends! “My heart sings with happiness, for my spirit is once again one with the forest.” It’s just so wonderful to see that after all his suffering Legolas’ spirit is finally at peace again amongst his beloved trees. I’m so glad you gave us a chance to see that, to know that in the end he finds the happiness that he lacked when tormented by the call of the sea for so long. “There is an echo of evil in these woods that chills my blood.” It’s so sad that the remnants of evil still linger in this place. It seems that nowhere was untouched, but I suppose that while it is a pity in a way that this Blessed Realm isn’t completely free of the effects of evil and that the elves didn’t leave all malevolence behind them when they sailed here, it also serves as a reminder of what was overcome and accomplished since then. “How does one *hide* from Olórin?” Legolas asked in astonishment as he and Gimli exchanged a meaningful glance at the seemingly impossible notion.” LOL! It’s so funny to think of even the Valar finding Gandalf a bit much to deal with sometimes! And I imagine he probably treats them in exactly the same gruff manner as he does everybody else… The last part of the story was amazing. I have to admit I was dreading it a little, but you handled it so beautifully. That moment when Gimli sees Gandalf as he truly is and then realises what this means really brought tears to my eyes. It’s so heart-breaking to think that he died just as their journey ended and their ship returned. In some ways I’d like to see that moment, but I think I’m actually really glad that I didn’t witness Legolas’ pain. You chose such a wonderful way to show us Gimli’s ending and you did it so skilfully. It’s so touching that Gimli be allowed see that Legolas will survive this and will not be alone. It’s good too that Gimli can see how many people truly cared for this one dwarf in a land of elves. That final sentence was so beautiful, jenolas. Such a sense of friendship, of love and of respect between the two great friends. It seems that Gimli manages to reassure Legolas, even in death, and bring a certain peace to his friend’s grieving heart. And what a wonderful gift he gave him to remember him by. *sigh* A truly lovely ending. Author Reply: I am pleased that you appreciate my subtle appraoch to Gimli's passing, and the message of love he left for Legolas. Once again thank you so much for your constant support and your insightful comments. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories, regards jenolas | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/2/2004 |
| a locket containing three golden hairs Bittersweet tears and beautiful memories. Thank you, jenolas. LKK Author Reply: You are most welcome, and thank you for enjoying the story. | |
| Elf messenger | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/1/2004 |
| Wow that was a very good story. although it was bittersweet I like how Gimli said farewell to Legolas. Keep up the good work with all your other works. Namarie. Elf messenger Author Reply: Your appreciation is most welcome and I will try to do as you suggest. | |
| *~SuGaR~* | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 2/29/2004 |
| *sniff, sniff*...so sad....WAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! i was a little confused at the sudden change, but when Gimli saw Legolas by the grves, i knew... loved the ending, Gimli giving Legolas the three hairs...*sniff* stories about Gimli in Valinor are always so great to read, but always so sad...WHY DO THEY HAVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway, loved the story! *~SuGaR~* Author Reply: In answer to your question... I guess because Gimli and the Hobbits are not immortal like the Elves. I am pleased you liked the story despite the sad ending. | |
| kirienne | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 2/28/2004 |
| Jenolas, this is a delightful, well written tale. I have loved reading about the continuing friendship between Gimli and Legolas. You handled the passing of the Dwarf with such tenderness, thank you, I think I had come to love Gimli nearly as much as Legolas did. I share the Elf's sorrow and grief as I sit trying to type this, not being able to see the keyboard so well thru my tears. Author Reply: As I have mentioned before, I like the Legolas and Gimli friendship, and I thik that a story told from Gimli's POV was long overdue. (passes a 'virtual' tissue). | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 2/28/2004 |
| That was beautiful! Author Reply: Thanks for saying so. | |
| Meldewen Ilce | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 2/28/2004 |
| Oh that was lovely - great story! Author Reply: Thanks. | |
| Bejai | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 2/28/2004 |
| Oh, I knew it was coming, but still so sad! I very much enjoyed this story; a change from my usual fare. Beautifully done; it shall remain one of my favorites. Author Reply: It is nice to know that I have captured your interest with this story enough to make it a favourite. Thank you. | |