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| Just to be With You by Pervinca | 2 Review(s) |
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| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 3/13/2004 |
| “Oh, fine. I told Pervinca, but that’s all. I had to tell her. She and Everard are engaged now, and I didn’t want to miss the wedding. She begged to come along with us, you know.” - Pervinca I like that; I've even depicted her as being an unofficial member of the 'gang'. The girl is full of spirit. Pippinfan Author Reply: I'm in the process of actually writing that scene into another story. Plus, I plan on involving Pervinca in the Battle of Bywater (to an extent). Thanks for the review! :) | |
| powerwriter | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 3/1/2004 |
| I was kind of wary of this story after reading the first chapter, but I have -really- gotten into it now!!! The last three chapters have been so intriguing especially this last one! It's interesting how you made Diamond apart of the story now...very clever how you did it too. I cannot wait to see what happens next! Author Reply: If you don't mind me asking, what about the first chapter made you wary? I'll see what I can do to fix it up! But I will agree that I (personally) prefer these later chapters. And I am glad you liked the way I worked Diamond into it. I was a little hesitant about it, but the more I thought about it, the more I thought it made sense. Thank you for reading and reviewing! | |