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Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle  by fan81981 8 Review(s)
sofiaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/9/2004
love the sequel. i hope the next chapter is gonna be up soon. I love how you end it with:
“Why did you wear my robe?”
“Because it smells like you.”
that just wants me to say "AW!"

chelseaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/19/2004
I was so glad to see that you had posted the sequel to this story. And even though I know the story is always at a great standard and is always exciting, i am always suprised at how more interesting it gets every chapter. I love the tension between legolas and Rhinure. However I hope soon that they will get a chance to be more open towards each other and reveal their feelings to one and another, because I feel sorry for them always having to try to put their duty before their heart.
~chelsea~

AnyReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/7/2004
Oh wow, after "battling" ;) through 54 chapters in a row, I'm glad I can read this one chapter by chapter now. This story is so great, I can't wait to find out what's really going on behind the scenes and what you have in store for Legolas and Rhinure in the end. The tension (political as well as sexual) is so high, it's brilliant. Please update soon. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story witrh us!

~Any

Author Reply: I hope it was not too much of a battle. You might have to wait for a while now - especially since my computer crashed and I lost all my notes/fics/drafts - everything. Am writing the next chapter - but it is coming slowly.

I hope I am able to maintain the tension - but just in case I have a few 'cute' chapters planned as well. or at least I had planned - will have to see how much I can remember.

Thanks for reading

tigerlily713Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2004
Great chapter! I am so happy to see that you have started up again! Lovely! Lily

Author Reply: Thanks. I hope you are happy enough to wait for a while. Computer problems. I am working on the next chapter but writing out an average of 8,000 to 10,000 words is such a bother - especially when you are doing it at work. my boss keeps trying to look into my diary. You can only imagine how embarressing writing the last part of Chap 1 was. *blush*

LOTRFaithReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/29/2004
Yay! And the story is back:-D Am very very very happy.... Poor Legolas... Hope you post soon! Namaarie~

Author Reply: Yes the story is back but may be put on hold for a time, while I wait for my computer to be fixed. Pen and paper will have to do in the meanwhile. *sigh*

brazgirlReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/29/2004
WOOOOOOOOOOOOONDERFUL CHAPTER! I don't know what I liked the most: Thranduil worried about his son's safecty or Legolas and Rhinure last words. Great!!! I am soooo glad you updated!!!

Author Reply: My favourite by far were Rhinure's parting words - I could just hear her say them. But then I think I need a therapist - I can hear elves speak to me. ;)

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/29/2004
OK. I am once again completely and totally hooked on this story. What a wonderful beginning. There is the promise of complex political plot line interwoven with character development. And wow! The sexual tension between Legolas and Rhinure is so well done. I am just bowled over, Fan.

Author Reply: Thanks - your words mean a lot. Though I often fear I have more 'promises' than resolution. I am glad you think there is character development for I despair for the two - only a little, but it does keep me up at night. ;) Thanks for reading.

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/29/2004
Yeah! Glad to see this up! The games and intrigue continue, and Rhinure and Legolas seem to be pawns in a game being played by others. They have a role, especially Rhinure, but they are also being used.

How awful to think that when Cothion looks at Legolas, he sees Thranduil's weakness. Weaknesses are meant to be exploited, but I think Cothion may find the prince is not weak himself, though it may be true he is his father's weakness.

I look forward to seeing where you take this.

Author Reply: Yes well Cothion doesn't know our Prince very well. He might that this weakness might prove to be a little more problematic than originally anticipated. Well, he would find out something like that if I ever get my laptop fixed. It has died on me - taking all my notes with it. :(

I hope you are really really looking forward to the next chapter for I don't know when I will have it out and you will need all your enthusiasm (and patience) to see you through.

PS. Thank you for being my beta - I don't know whether I have ever said but I have meant it many a time.

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