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See the Stars  by daw the minstrel 2 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/2/2005
I think Thranduil is too hard on Eilian...Saying he was to old to go to the glade, he needs time to relax his troubles as well...

Author Reply: Thranduil is pretty hard on Eilian, you're right about that. I think the two of them are quite different, so it's hard for Thranduil to understand why Eilian does some of the things he does.

esamenReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/8/2004
Oooo! I had wished for a little more fire and brimstone from Thranduil. I picked the right story!

This is so fun to read. The writing is great. Everything is so smooth. Wonderful description, action and dialogue . . . and characterization . . . I love it!

Author Reply: Esamen, you don't know how good you have made me feel. This story is the first one I ever wrote. I stopped and wrote "Watch This" in the middle of it, but this was the first and now I can really see its rough spots. So if you are enjoying it despite them, then I am really glad (and relieved!).

daw

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