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| Avon's Drabbles by Avon | 3 Review(s) |
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| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/20/2004 |
| I still love this drabble, but I don't like to think that the twins chose mortality, however convincing you make it. But whatever happened, they were together. Lovely work. Jay Author Reply: I don't want them to choose mortality either - but I don't want them to leave M-e either. I need option C ;-) | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/12/2004 |
| Oooh, very nice. I like thinking that each brother made the same choice as the other... and for the reason you gave. Author Reply: Thanks, Shirebound. I *definitely* always want the twins to stay together - I don't like it when stories split them, no matter how good I recognise the arguments to be. ;-) Avon | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/7/2004 |
| I do not like the idea that the twins chose to be mortal. But setting aside my personal preference for their decision, I do like your interepretation as presented here. The ending sentence where you list the reasons the twins rode to Pelannor is very nice. It works, building item by item, to convice the reader why. Good job! LKK Author Reply: HI and thanks yet again for your feedback. Me, I just plain don't like the twins having to choose - nasty Tolkien! In my own personal universe they don't choose to be mortal - but nor do they leave M-e, which I think is against all canon so hey. Avon | |