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The Wrong Path  by White Wolf 3 Review(s)
daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 38 on 3/7/2004
I was glad to see this hopeful chapter. How hard it must have been to let Legolas have those convulsions and not try to steady him. Thranduil is certainly his impatient self! Legolas seems sort of like a stroke victim to me, having to learn to do things all over again.

Author Reply: It is nice to hear from you again. I thought you had quit reading the story a while back.

When one of Thranduil's children is in need, the king can get very impatient in wanting to help them. I prefer to portray that side of him as a father. I can't abide it, when he is portrayed as abusive.

You are right, I thought of a stroke victim, when I wrote about Legolas's speech problems.

OakWolfReviewed Chapter: 38 on 3/7/2004
WOOHOO!Legolas is talking(sort of) I take it he's out of the proverbial woods, if he isn't you're gonna kill me.I was actually worrying about him!

Author Reply: Yes, Legolas is talking, sort of.

All I can say about the "you're gonna kill me" comment is: What kind of flowers do you like? Also, keep worrying. He's going to need your concern. :o)

SivanReviewed Chapter: 38 on 3/7/2004
Thank you!

At least now Legolas eat something and talk normally.

I still love what I read, and very enjoyed read it.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your story.

Sivan

Author Reply: Yes, the poor boy was really hungry.

He can finally communicate, even if it's not quite normal.

Thank you for continuing to love the story. More soon.

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